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		<title>Canmore event</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Apr 2012 19:44:34 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Stephen Legault</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I love reading to my friends, and so it was in Canmore last night. My thanks go out to new friends and old for your attendance at Cafe Books last night for another book event in the Bow Valley. Cafe Books has hosted events for my last four novels and as always they made me [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love reading to my friends, and so it was in Canmore last night. My thanks go out to new friends and old for your attendance at Cafe Books last night for another book event in the Bow Valley. Cafe Books has hosted events for my last four novels and as always they made me feel very welcome, with wine and kind words. Thanks to those who stocked up on books &#8211; at least two folks went home with four books each! Below is a photo of me getting into character; the photo was taken by another character, my ten-year-old son Rio. Thanks again to all for a very nice evening.</p>
<p>There&#8217;s a big stack of signed copies of <em>The Vanishing Track</em>, <em>The End of the Line</em>, and <em>The Darkening Archipelago</em> at Cafe Books. I&#8217;m told <em>The Cardinal Divide</em> is on order. Click <a href="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/works/">here</a> to read a summary of each of these titles.</p>
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<div id="attachment_1647" class="wp-caption aligncenter" style="width: 310px"><a href="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/006.jpg"><img class="size-medium wp-image-1647  " style="border: 1px solid black;" title="006" src="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/006-300x225.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="225" /></a><p class="wp-caption-text">Reading from The Vanishing Track in Canmore, Alberta. </p></div>
<p>I&#8217;m off to Vancouver and Victoria next. Check <a href="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/touring-promotion/" target="_blank">here</a> for event details. Follow me on Twitter <a href="http://twitter.com/stephenlegault" target="_blank">@stephenlegault </a>for updates.</p>
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		<title>Five Chapters and an Owl&#8217;s Nest</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Apr 2012 18:54:39 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Stephen Legault</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I did a little mini-tour of Calgary’s books stores last night. I didn’t get to all of them, but a lot. I thought that with the Vanishing Track enjoying some degree of success in that city that I should do what I could to maintain momentum. There’s only so much an author can do; one [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I did a little mini-tour of Calgary’s books stores last night. I didn’t get to all of them, but a lot. I thought that with the <em>Vanishing Track</em> enjoying some degree of <a href="http://www.calgaryherald.com/news/Calgary+Bestsellers/6426930/story.html">success</a> in that city that I should do what I could to maintain momentum. There’s only so much an author can do; one of the things is sign books.</p>
<p>It’s always humbling to walk into any book store, let alone five Chapters stores in a row. The first Chapters I visited was in the Chinook Centre and I had to navigate my way around a <em>massive</em> circular table adorned with the biggest stack of books I’ve ever seen. It must have been piled as tall as a person could reach, and all by one writer: Suzanne Collins, author of the <em>Hunger Games</em> trilogy.</p>
<p>She also got her own section. Similar piles of that same book greeted me in the other Chapters.</p>
<p>More than just that display of marketing power, the thing that really humbles me when I walk into a Chapters is the sheer volume of titles vying for the consumer’s eye. There are tens of thousands of books on their shelves. And that’s just a drop in the bucket of what is being published each year. Ten times that number are being published as e-books. It’s good to keep perspective.</p>
<p>I dutifully sought out copies of <em>The Vanishing Track</em> and the <em>End of the Line,</em> my two most recent books, on the store’s shelves and signed them and introduced myself to store staff and asked for “signed by the author” stickers. I don’t really know if this helps book sales. I don’t think it hurts, and I suppose if a reader has to choose between two books, a scrawled personalization might tip the scale in my favour.</p>
<p>I did have two really positive experiences. The first was visiting Owl’s Nest Books, one of my two favourite book sellers in Calgary, the other being Pages on Kensington (who I visited last week). They had lots of my books on their shelves, including copies of <em>The Darkening Archipelago</em>, a previous Cole Blackwater title. Owl’s Nest, like other independent stores, is not so easily influenced by mass hysteria around books like <em>The Hunger Games</em>. I’m sure they had copies in the store, but nothing that threatened to bury a customer if they inadvertently knocked the display table.</p>
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<div id="attachment_1639" class="wp-caption aligncenter" style="width: 490px"><a href="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/001.jpg"><img class="size-full wp-image-1639 " title="001" src="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/001.jpg" alt="" width="480" height="360" /></a><p class="wp-caption-text">The End of the Line, Darkening Archipelago and The Vanishing Track at Owl&#39;s Nest Books. You can just see Stieg Larsson being crowded to the side by my titles.</p></div>
<p>The other really positive experience was in the Dalhousie Chapters. They were short on staff, so I just grabbed copies of my books off the shelves and took them to the checkout counter where I signed them and handed them to the clerk for stickers and re-shelving. The people in line behind me had a small armload of mystery titles and they asked me about my books and then happily added copies of <em>The End of the Line </em>and the <em>Vanishing Track</em> to their purchases. Connecting with readers is one of the best parts about being a writer.</p>
<p>In the end, I don’t know if driving all over Calgary and signing books will help sell a few more. But it was good to meet more book sellers and a few readers. And my message is that, as a writer, I’m willing to go the extra mile to make a success of my books.</p>
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		<title>An opportunity for gratitude</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 10 Apr 2012 01:55:27 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Stephen Legault</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[“Actually, I’m an overnight success. But it took twenty years.” &#8212; Monty Hall I started my day today by checking my email and finding a Google Alert for my name. The alert told me there was something in The Calgary Herald so I clicked on the link and found out that The Vanishing Track, which [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<blockquote><p>“Actually, I’m an overnight success. But it took twenty years.” &#8212; Monty Hall</p></blockquote>
<p>I started my day today by checking my email and finding a Google Alert for my name. The alert told me there was something in <em>The Calgary Herald</em> so I clicked on the link and found out that <em>The Vanishing Track</em>, which was released a month ago by TouchWood Editions, was the #1 <a href="http://www.calgaryherald.com/news/Calgary+Bestsellers/6426930/story.html" target="_blank">bestseller</a> there last week.</p>
<p>I was gob-smacked. My first instinct was to tell someone, but because I start my day at 5am there wasn’t anybody around to confide in. The kids are at their other household and Jenn is on the coast where it was only 4am. Its not part of a healthy marriage to wake your wife up so early, even if it is with good news.</p>
<p>I don’t even have a pet I could tell so I made another cup of tea and paced around the house for a while, and then sat down and felt a wave of happiness and something else &#8211;relief? &#8212; rush over me</p>
<p>I’ve been writing since 1988 and seriously trying to publish since 1994. My first book was released in 2006 and since then I’ve had four more published. This is the first time I have been on a bestseller list. Just like Monty Hall said, this overnight success has been some time in coming. No, it’s not <em>The New York Times</em> or <em>The Globe and Mail</em>, but this means something to me.</p>
<p>It means that my hard work is paying off. It means that the choices I’ve been making are sound. And it means that I have a lot to be thankful for.</p>
<p>That’s what is most important about this for me: gratitude. I am grateful that every morning I can wake up and sit down at the computer and without fail write something. I’ve never had a single day of writers block. Yes, I’ve encountered plot challenges, but that’s different. Writing comes completely naturally, if you call dogged determination and waking up hungry to create and succeed every single morning natural.</p>
<p>I’m also grateful to have an impressive team behind me, starting with my wife Jenn, who is the first person to read everything I write to keep me from seriously embarrassing myself. Ruth and Frances at TouchWood form the backstop of my editorial team and Lenore has been doing her best with my rotten syntax and terrible spelling for the last couple of novels. Without them I’d be nowhere. The rest of the gang at TouchWood – Peter, Emily, and a whole gaggle of other folks who I adore but whose names I can’t remember or find in my email – make me look far better than I deserve.</p>
<p>I can’t forget my children: a couple of hours ago my 6-year-old Silas called me up to congratulate me. Either his mom and step-dad told him about this or he’s creeping me on Facebook. Kids these days.</p>
<p>There are a lot of people selling my books. To get to #1 on a local bestsellers list (without passing through numbers 10 through 2 I should ad) means that two book stores in Calgary – <a href="http://owlsnestbooks.com/" target="_blank">The Owl’s Nest</a> and <a href="http://www.pages.ab.ca/" target="_blank">Pages on Kensington</a> – had to sell a stack of books. That’s how it works: bestsellers lists, including the <em>Globe and Mail</em>&#8216;s, are compiled from sales from independent booksellers. There aren’t as many of them around anymore, and digital book sales are having an impact too, so this is a heroic effort. In additional to these fine Calgary book sellers, Victoria’s Munro’s, Bolen and Russell Books, and of course, my favourite Chronicles of Crime, are what keep writers like me motivated. In Canmore Café Books pretty much treats me like family.</p>
<p>But most importantly, readers are who I have to be grateful to. People like you who buy these books for their Kindles or Kobos, who pick them up at their favourite independent book seller or at one of the big stores, who take them out of the library or buy them used or, as one woman recently wrote to tell me, found <a href="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/works/cole-blackwater/"><em>The Darkening Archipelago</em></a> in a lending library in her hotel in Thailand. It turns out that Alison and I worked at Royal Roads University at the same time (and the book was one of the only English language books on the shelf) so she picked it up and now it’s continuing its globe-trotting.</p>
<p>Readers are what make my job so much fun. We connect across the universe; we are, as someone once said, holding hands under the table (or maybe it was the covers&#8230;.). So thanks for buying my books; you make it possible for me to keep doing what I love, hopefully in every increasing amounts. I am grateful to you.</p>
<p>If you&#8217;d like to keep in touch follow me on Twitter <a href="http://twitter.com/stephenlegault">@stephenlegault. </a></p>
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		<title>Good Friday Writing</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Apr 2012 23:03:02 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Stephen Legault</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I finished the first draft of The Glacier Gallows today at twelve thirty this afternoon. On the dot. The manuscript is full of holes and there are rents in the plot that you could drive just about any cliché you wanted to through. But they can all be fixed, and most will, in the subsequent [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I finished the first draft of <em>The Glacier Gallows</em> today at twelve thirty this afternoon. On the dot. The manuscript is full of holes and there are rents in the plot that you could drive just about any cliché you wanted to through. But they can all be fixed, and most will, in the subsequent drafts. Because I made a bunch of plot changes towards the end of the novel, I’m going to have to go back and make more additions and subtractions early in the book.</p>
<p>I penned about 8,000 words this morning. I had planned to work on this manuscript over the long weekend, being at home sans wife and children, and now that it’s done all have to do for the next few days is sit back and gloat. And go skiing.</p>
<p>In case you’re just dying to know, here’s what a day in the life looks like as I race through the conclusion of a first draft.</p>
<p><strong>10:30 pm</strong>. A good morning’s writing starts with an early bed time. Healthy, wealthy and all that, minus the wealthy.</p>
<p><strong>4:14 am.</strong> Wake up, already thinking about the final chapters of the book. I just fall back asleep when…</p>
<p><strong>4:50 am.</strong> The alarm goes off. I lay in bed for a couple of minutes and then go down to the kitchen, make tea.</p>
<p><strong>5:00 am.</strong> Back in bed I listen to the news. I usually do this in my office, but Jenn is away so I won’t wake anybody.</p>
<p><strong>5:03 am.</strong> The news is the abbreviated version reserved for holiday’s when there is little newsworthy going on, or nobody left at the CBC to report it. Thanks Stevo. Feel cheated. Listen to the first 6 minutes of some BBC show on science.</p>
<p><strong>5:09 am</strong>. Still savouring my first cup of tea, I commute the 7 steps to my office and read the <em>Globe and Mail</em>, <em>Politico</em>, and Pearls before Swine, online.</p>
<p><strong>5:11 am. </strong>Open <em>The Glacier Gallows</em> and start reading the last few paragraphs I wrote yesterday.</p>
<p><strong>5:12 am</strong>. Read Calvin and Hobbs. That’s right. On <a href="http://www.gocomics.com/calvinandhobbes/" target="_blank">Go Comics</a> you can read the whole strip, right from the start, with a new instalment daily. The internet is swell.</p>
<p><strong>5:13 am. </strong>Back to <em>The Glacier Gallows:</em> start writing. I’m still not fully awake so it’s slow going at first.</p>
<p><strong>5:20 am.</strong> Make second cup of tea. First breakfast: Honey-nut cheerio’s with almond breeze.</p>
<p><strong>5:30 am. </strong>I work my way through some minor changes that I was thinking about at 4:14 and then start into a new chapter. The writing comes very quickly at this point and by 6:20 I’ve written 1,200 words.</p>
<p><strong>6:21am.</strong> Third cup of tea. I switch to decaf (And don’t sneer. <a href="http://www.taylorsofharrogate.co.uk/teaitem.asp?itmid=746">Taylor’s of Harrogate</a> makes the best bagged tea in the world and they started making a decaffeinated tea and it’s awesome.)</p>
<p><strong>6:30 am. </strong>Check Tweet Deck. Send a few tweets. Check Facebook. Check weather forecast and look at Ski Louise web site. Fantasise about skiing.</p>
<p><strong>6:40 am</strong>. Back at it. (Sound of whip cracking.) I bore into the next chapter, and write another 1,100 words before…</p>
<p><strong>7:30.</strong> Fourth cup of tea. Back to caffeine. High octane stuff. I use a fork to speed the steeping process.</p>
<p><strong>7:33</strong> Get distracted (again, always) by sunrise out my office window. Take pictures. Upload. Edit. Post.</p>
<div id="attachment_1612" class="wp-caption alignleft" style="width: 624px"><a href="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/276.jpg"><img class="size-large wp-image-1612  " title="276" src="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/276-1024x308.jpg" alt="" width="614" height="185" /></a><p class="wp-caption-text">The view from my office window of Mount Peter Lougheed (right), Wind Ridge (forested, foreground) Mount Allen (centre) and Mount Collembola (left)</p></div>
<p><strong>7:42. </strong>For the next couple of hours I work on one of the climatic scenes in the book. It’s the much anticipated (by me) chase scene. Good fun.</p>
<p><strong>9:45.</strong> Fifth cup of tea. Back to decaf. Switch things up. Keep the adrenal glands guessing. Second breakfast: toast with jam. I’ve come to a plot challenge that I have to work through, so I pace around the empty house, talking to myself. “Well, what <em>would</em> Cole do? He would do this…No, no, no he would do this….”</p>
<p><strong>10:04 am</strong>. Take a shower. Next to going for a run, this is the easiest way for me to solve a plot problem.</p>
<p><strong>10:09 am. </strong>Warm up fifth cup of tea.</p>
<p><strong>10:10 am.</strong> Back at it. The plot challenge overcome, I burn through the a very long, exciting chapter that involves a car chase, a gun fight, a fist fight, an car accident and livestock being startled by masked assailants.</p>
<p><strong>11:45 am</strong>. I want more tea, but it’s a bad idea, so I drink a glass of water and feel slightly righteous.</p>
<p><strong>11:47 am.</strong> All I have left is a short epilogue. Not much room for creativity there….But wait, the excitement isn’t over! I decide to set up the fifth Cole Blackwater book right there in the epilogue. Legault you clever fellow. That’s where all the smug gloating comes from.</p>
<p><strong>12:30 pm. </strong>I punch the last period of the last sentence of the last paragraph….you get the idea…of the first draft of <em>The Glacier Gallows.</em></p>
<p><strong>12:31 pm.</strong> Tweet about it.</p>
<p><strong>12:32 pm</strong>. Wonder what I’m going to work on next.</p>
<p>If you would like to know what comes next, follow me on Twitter <a href="http://twitter.com/stephenlegault">@stephenlegault. </a></p>
<p>To read all of my posts on Deconstructing Draft One for both <a href="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/works/the-glacier-gallows/" target="_blank"><em>The Glacier Gallows</em></a> and <a href="stephenlegault.com/writing/works/the-third-riel-conspiracy/" target="_blank"><em>The Third Riel Conspiracy</em></a>, <a href="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/category/deconstructing-draft-1/" target="_blank">click here. </a></p>
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		<title>Just the dude at the keyboard</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Apr 2012 02:13:17 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Stephen Legault</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Rest easy: I made it through the rough patch. Everybody seemed so concerned. I did an interview with Russell Bowers, the host of CBC’s Daybreak Alberta last Thursday and he started the interview noting that I was in a bit of a jam. He had read this blog. It’s no big deal, I assured him: [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Rest easy: I made it through the rough patch.</p>
<p>Everybody seemed so concerned. I did an interview with Russell Bowers, the host of CBC’s <a href="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/reviews/" target="_blank">Daybreak Alberta</a> last Thursday and he started the interview noting that I was in a bit of a jam. He had read this blog. It’s no big deal, I assured him: Cole got the pickup truck moving again and he’s no longer loitering on the streets of Cheyenne Wyoming.</p>
<p>He did get himself in a heap of trouble, mind you.</p>
<p>Things don’t always go as planned when I’m working on a first draft. That’s certainly been the case with<em> The Glacier Gallows.</em> Given that this story has been in my head for more than five years, and the meticulous planning that I do when I’m preparing to pen a first draft, you’d think that this would have been all but feta-complete. It doesn’t work that way. I step into first draft mode with a solid idea as to where I’m going, and a good idea as to how to get there, but there are a lot of miles between word one and word ninety-five thousand.</p>
<p>Characters change; the story takes on a life of its own. It goes in directions that I couldn’t’ have foreseen. It’s a living thing: born of the grey matter between my ears in part, but more a mixture of the creative soup of the cosmos than anything else. I’m just the dude at the keyboard.</p>
<p>The one thing that has happened in penning <em>The Glacier Gallows</em> that has never happened before is about two-thirds of the way through I changed who the killer is. I didn’t see that coming. But there I was working my way through that jam in the plot line when it occurred to me that the killer had been revealed too soon, and maybe I had better rethink this whole mess.</p>
<p>I did, and things changed. I’ll have to go back in draft two and expand on some stuff in the early chapters, but I’m pretty happy with the way the story is shaping up.</p>
<p>As always, there’s going to be a lot of work to do to get this book to print in the next eighteen months. And I’ve still got three or four chapters, and another six or eight thousand words to write tomorrow morning, but I’m in the home stretch. I think.</p>
<p>Wanna read more about first drafts and plot changes? Follow along <a href="http://twitter.com/stephenlegault" target="_blank">@stephenlegault. </a></p>
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		<title>Trust</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Mar 2012 15:35:56 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Stephen Legault</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I’m writing this blog post about the first draft of The Glacier Gallows because it’s easier than writing the first draft of the Glacier Gallows. I hit a wall this morning. It’s not an insurmountable wall. From experience I know that I’ll overcome this obstacle, but it stopped me never the less. I’m about 75,000 [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I’m writing this blog post about the first draft of <a href="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/works/the-vanishing-track/" target="_blank"><em>The Glacier Gallows</em></a> because it’s easier than writing the first draft of <em>the Glacier Gallows</em>.</p>
<p>I hit a wall this morning. It’s not an insurmountable wall. From experience I know that I’ll overcome this obstacle, but it stopped me never the less.</p>
<p>I’m about 75,000 words into the book; this is the time when the story’s pace is supposed to be peaking; when all the red hearings are supposed to be evaporating, and our hero – Cole Blackwater – is supposed to be figuring out what exactly the mystery in the novel actually is.</p>
<p>But he’s not. I left him parked in a pickup truck in Cheyenne Wyoming this morning. He’s about to brace one of the bad guys in the story; a character who the reader hasn’t met, but who we have heard a lot about.</p>
<p>The problem is, I’m just not certain what happens next.</p>
<p>I have my outline, but so far into the novel a few things have changed, and the outline only says that Cole discovers that…. It’s not much help, frankly. When I was writing the outline I knew this would be a problem, but trusted I&#8217;d have a solution by the time I got to this point in the novel. I don&#8217;t. Not yet.</p>
<p>I know what I’m supposed to do: Just keep writing. And I will. Tomorrow morning I’ll sit back down and write my way through the obstacle. I’ve learned to trust the <a href="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/category/deconstructing-draft-1/" target="_blank">first draft process</a>. This is my 9<sup>th</sup> first draft, and after facing this challenge before, in particular in <em>The Third Riel Conspiracy</em>, I know that if I just keep my fingers moving, I’ll get enough material down in the first draft that I can clean up the plot in subsequent versions of the book.</p>
<p>Trust is a critical component of the creative process. These stories emerge from somewhere I can only vaguely describe as my imagination. And what is that? Imagination is a part of the subconscious self that is connected with the vast store of ideas, energy, information and inspiration that makes up the universe around us. We’re all connected to that storehouse of creativity; for some the pipe is just a little fatter, allowing the ideas to flow faster, and with greater regularity. Practice and millage is what makes the pipe bigger.</p>
<p>We have to trust the creative process. It’s never failed me before, and it won’t fail me now. Part of that trust is knowing this can’t be forced. I can’t force myself to solve this plot problem. I can work at it, but in this case working to solve the problem means taking a step back and letting my subconscious take over. I&#8217;ll meditate and later today I&#8217;ll go for a long run in the hills. As Lao Tzu says, <em>emptiness is the source of all things. </em></p>
<p>The way to overcome these challenges is to relax and not worry too much about it. There isn’t a shadow of a doubt that I’ll write my way through this predicament and the novel will take shape. It might <a href="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/2011/09/16/between-1-10-on-the-suck-o-meter/">not be very good</a>, but I’ve got lots of time for second, third and fourth drafts.</p>
<p>One technique I’ve used to tap into this creative store-house in the past is to sleep on the vexing challenge. Before going to bed I meditate on the problem (which means, I clear my mind of the challenge and then ask myself a simple, clear question) planting the seed in my subconscious and believing that when I wake up, I’ll have the solution. Sometimes it takes several days, but this almost always works.</p>
<p>So I’ve left Cole sitting in his truck, watching, and waiting for me, his author, to know what to do next. I’m as excited as the next guy to find out what that will be.</p>
<p>If you want to find out what happens next when I do, follow me on Twitter <a href="http://twitter.com/stephenlegault" target="_blank">@stephenlegault</a>.</p>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 22 Mar 2012 16:21:39 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Stephen Legault</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I reached a landmark in the writing of The Glacier Gallows over the weekend. On Sunday morning I finished Part 1 of the book. 53,000 words in, and there it was. It took me a few false starts to get there; the children needed food, and there was this business of household chores: apparently the [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I reached a landmark in the writing of <a href="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/works/the-glacier-gallows/" target="_blank"><em>The Glacier Gallows</em></a> over the weekend. On Sunday morning I finished Part 1 of the book. 53,000 words in, and there it was. It took me a few false starts to get there; the children needed food, and there was this business of household chores: apparently the kitchen and bathrooms need to be cleaned every now and again.</p>
<p>But on Sunday morning I breezed past the 225 page mark, wrapping up what I consider to be a distinct part of this novel. In the first half of the book the story is told by several people, in different places, and at different times. At the end of Part 1 the various timelines and character-perspectives collapse into one. Cole Blackwater, the novel’s protagonist, is part of each chapter but sometimes only peripherally. At the end of Part 1 the focus shifts squarely onto Cole and will remain there throughout Part 2.</p>
<p>Without giving too much away, Part 1 is where Cole Blackwater gets into something of a pickle. Cole is working on a climate change project with Brian Marriott, his once arch-enemy who used to work for the Petroleum Industry.  Brian is murdered while they are leading a hike though Montana’s Glacier National Park, thus the glacier part of the title. Cole isn’t above suspicion, hence the gallows.</p>
<p>On Sunday I wrapped up Part 1 and then I just kept on going. Right into the middle of nowhere.</p>
<p>The next morning I started back again with Part 2 and realized that I was boring myself to tears; never a good sign. After a rather dramatic culmination of the action at the end of Part 1, I had to keep the energy up in the middle of the book. I backed up and took a run at it again. The reader, I guessed, will likely expect the same sort of walloping suspense that the book starts with (or at least that I think it starts with, delusional pen-jockey that I am). I think my second attempt was better; at least I was able to stay awake.</p>
<p>The middle of the novel is always a challenge for me. By breaking this book into two distinct parts, I’m trying to inject some freshness into the middle nowhere; make it the middle of everywhere!</p>
<p>To keep the middle of everywhere from becoming the middle of a bowl of mushy oatmeal, I’ve been developing a few first draft techniques:</p>
<p><strong>1. Avoid exposition </strong></p>
<p>I try to keep the plot crisp and resist the urge to melt into narcissistic explosion, expounding on how much my characters (ie: <em>I</em>) know about the world by having them droll on in their heads about subject matter only peripherally related to the novel’s plot. I know from that which I speak: I’ve done this <em>many</em> times, and thankfully my story editor has had the good sense and courage to remind me that I’m writing a mystery novel and not a polemic on some environmental issue or a lesson on Canadian history.</p>
<p><strong>2. Keep everybody talking </strong></p>
<p>With <em>The Glacier Gallows</em> I’m writing as much of the book as possible as pure dialog. I learned from reading one of Chuck Wending’s expletive-filled but insightful <a href="http://terribleminds.com/ramble/2011/08/09/25-ways-to-make-exposition-your-bitch/" target="_blank">blog posts</a> on the craft of writing to eliminate as much exposition as possible. If I have to, I’ll fill in some additional scenery and details in subsequent drafts.</p>
<p>The reader, I am told, is less likely to skip over dialog than narrative description or exposition. That means they will continue to read through the mushy middle if you just keep everybody talking.</p>
<p><strong>3. Now is a good time for that plot twist you’ve been saving </strong></p>
<p>I like to introduce a plot twist somewhere in the middle of the story. In the <em>Cardinal Divide</em> the twist was the discovery that the murder hadn’t actually happened where the cops and even the protagonist thought it had. In the <em>Darkening Archipelago</em> the twist was the revelation that Archie Ravenwing, heretofore believed to have died in an accident at sea, had actually been murdered. Do something to keep the reader on their toes. Give them a jolt to get the blood circulating. Step away from the cattle prod; yes <em>you</em>.</p>
<p><strong>4. Cut to the Chase</strong></p>
<p>If you’re slogging along wondering when the hell your novel will finally come to an end, there’s a good chance it will, and sooner than you want it to. Scrap pile of broken dreams time. Sometimes when I’m writing the middle of a book I catch myself wishing I didn’t have to scribble all this crap and could just get to the good stuff. So I do. As I said above, if what you’re writing seems tedious and tired, there’s a very good chance readers will find it tedious and tired as well. Get to the point! Skip a chapter, even two: write the next chase, cut to the sex scene, or revel in the big reveal. There’s a fair chance that whatever you are labouring through is unnecessary anyway. Even if it isn’t entirely, you can likely cut 75% of it and still have a stand up novel.</p>
<p><strong>5. Beware False Summits. </strong></p>
<p>I hate false summits. When in the mountains, sometimes I’ll look up and think, wow: I’m almost there! Then I crest the rise and realize I still have a thousand feet of elevation gain and I’m out of Snickers bars.</p>
<p>In writing, however, false summits can be useful. I started dabbling with them when I wrote early drafts of <a href="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/works/the-vanishing-track/" target="_blank"><em>The Vanishing Track</em></a>, and continued with the publication of <a href="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/works/the-end-of-the-line/" target="_blank"><em>The End of the Line</em>.</a> The reader gets the impression that the mystery has been solved and there’s nothing left but the Sherlockian summation of the crime when whapo! More action, another twist, more fisticuffs! This sort of thing helps me write the mushy middle because I never hesitate to throw one of these false summits somewhere into the middle of the book.</p>
<p><strong>6. Head down, chin up </strong></p>
<p>Sometimes the middle of the book is just plain hard work to write. The excitement of starting a new project is long in the rear-view mirror. At the 45 or 50,000 word mark I’m still 45 or 50,000 words from the end. This is the time when I heed some of the best advice I’ve read. It’s from <a href="http://www.brainpickings.org/index.php/2012/02/22/henry-miller-on-writing/">Henry Millar</a>: “<em>When you can’t create you can work.</em>” It’s not all glamour; it’s not all car chases and fist fights and nail biting tension. Sometimes it’s weaving a complex story that slowly, deliberately builds towards a crescendo.</p>
<p>Sometimes I just put my head down and write through whatever ennui I’m feeling towards my project. Sometimes I’ll just force myself to write another thousand or fifteen hundred words, even if I know I’m going to burn them in a garbage can during the next draft. It gets the creative juices flowing. If nothing else, I can write my way to the next car chase or fist fight.</p>
<p>I’m trying to learn the difference between this need to just work through a difficult chapter and plain old boring writing. It’s the difference between being in the middle of nowhere and the middle of everywhere.</p>
<p>Fifty thousand words to go.</p>
<p>To read more  blog posts on Deconstructing First Draft, <a href="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/category/deconstructing-draft-1/" target="_blank">click here</a>.</p>
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		<title>A mystery about love</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Mar 2012 20:22:36 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Stephen Legault</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[With the release of The Vanishing Track I’m sure to get the occasional question about what the book is about. I’ve got my stock answer all down pat: it’s a mystery book about homelessness. Cole Blackwater and his friends discover that homeless people are vanishing from Vancouver’s Downtown Eastside and soon uncover a dangerous cabal [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>With the release of <em>The Vanishing Track</em> I’m sure to get the occasional question about what the book is about. I’ve got my stock answer all down pat: it’s a mystery book about homelessness. Cole Blackwater and his friends discover that homeless people are vanishing from Vancouver’s Downtown Eastside and soon uncover a dangerous cabal of city officials, high ranking cops, developers and crime bosses who are conspiring to bulldoze Skid Row. Are the people living in the Single Room Occupancy hotels in the way of progress? Or is something more sinister at work.</p>
<p>Dum-dum-dum.</p>
<p>When Shelagh Rogers and I yack it up on The Next Chapter, that’s likely what I’ll say. But like the other books in the Cole Blackwater series, this is a murder mystery with a message. Of course, the plot comes first. No soap box rants, just good old fashioned story telling. But beneath the narrative arc of the story is something far more meaningful to me. <em>The Vanishing Track</em> is a mystery about love.</p>
<p>Every single human being that I met during the research for this book was born with dreams and hopes and a vision for their lives that, in many cases, have not come to fruition. They now live lives that they could not have imaged: lives of poverty, disease, drug and alcohol abuse, violence, fear and pain.</p>
<p>But they also live lives full of love, hope, courage, joy and triumph. When I meet people on the street, this is what I choose to see.</p>
<p>We are all connected by love. In the late 1990’s I spent a lot of time in Ottawa. One night I was walking back from the Market to my hotel. As I crossed the bridge over the Rideau Canal I met a man who was asking for change. I had some left over pizza, which I handed to him, and we chatted for a while. He gratefully accepted the food and as we parted he said, “God bless you.” I said “God bless you” in return.</p>
<p>That was strange for me because it’s been a very long time since I believed in a God that would bless me. Later when explaining this to a friend she told me matter-of-factly “Well, what you were really saying was I love you.”</p>
<p>And of course, I was. Love is the energy of the universe that animates us and binds us together and breathes life into everything we see, hear, feel, taste and touch. And everything that is beyond our senses.</p>
<p>When I wrote <em>The Vanishing Track</em> I wanted to ensure that the book was grounded in love; that it was a book about the need for us to reach out to people less fortunate than we are and treat them with love, respect and compassion. When we see someone on the street we must remember that we are merely extensions of each other, all waves in the ocean of humanity, and that to love these people is nothing more and nothing less than to love ourselves.</p>
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		<title>9 things I learned writing The Vanishing Track</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Mar 2012 17:18:52 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Stephen Legault</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[The Vanishing Track, the third Cole Blackwater Mystery has been released (like the Kracken in the Clash of the Titans, but without all the teeth and screaming) and I’d like to offer a few things I learned during the writing of my fifth book. Here you go: 1. Think Ahead I started working on the [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://stephenlegault.com/writing/works/the-vanishing-track/" target="_blank"><em>The Vanishing Track</em></a>, the third Cole Blackwater Mystery has been released (like the Kracken in <em>the Clash of the Titans,</em> but without all the teeth and screaming) and I’d like to offer a few things I learned during the writing of my fifth book. Here you go:</p>
<p><strong><span style="text-decoration: underline;">1. Think Ahead </span></strong></p>
<p>I started working on the idea for <em>The Vanishing Track</em> in 2003: 9-years ago. Okay, now I’m a little depressed. I need a moment.</p>
<p>I’m back. Books take time. They take time to write and time to edit (some, like mine, much more time than others) and they take time to publish. Think ahead. The narrative arc for <em>The Vanishing Track</em> was essentially set back in 2003 while I sat on a flight from Costa Rica to Calgary, dreaming up the story line for the first books in this series.</p>
<p>Had I not been thinking ahead, I wouldn’t have been able to weave key elements into the first two books of the series that are important in the third. I also might have settled into a complacency with the protagonist, rather than pushing his development in the first two books.</p>
<p><strong><span style="text-decoration: underline;">2. Get Help </span></strong></p>
<p>I needed a lot of it. First off, and because <em>The Vanishing Track</em> is a reverse mystery there’s no need for a spoiler alert, the antagonist in this novel is a psychopath. I didn’t know anything about psychopaths when I started writing this book; just what I saw in the movies, which is enough to be dangerous. The first person I turned to for help was my best friend and running buddy Josh, who is a clinical psychologist. We spent hours talking about Sean Livingstone as we ran up and over Victoria’s Mount Doug again and again. He helped me create some real complexity in the character.</p>
<p>Next I turned to Judy Graves, the Vancouver City Advocate for the Homeless, and other activists. Judy and I worked on a book together for a short while, and while it never came to fruition (first and hopefully only time I sent an advance cheque back to a publisher). During the planning phase for that book I learned a great deal from Judy about the real cause of homelessness and what we can do to solve it. Other’s like Pivot Legal Society founder John Richardson, and his colleague David Eby, were inspirations.</p>
<p>But the people who helped me the most were those I met on the street: Sharon who I used to talk with outside of Wellburn’s market near my home in Fernwood; Chris who I chatted with in Victoria’s Chinatown; and Sam, in Gastown in Vancouver. There were many, many more. Too many. The Epilogue of <em>The Vanishing Track</em>, which I particularly like, was inspired by an encounter in the Downtown Eastside when I was doing a ride along with the Vancouver Police Department. The gentleman in question was very drunk early in the morning and told me about his wife and children he hadn’t seen in years. It helped me realize that behind every single person we see on the street, and often pass by and sometimes stop to talk to, is the story of a life lived in a way that could never have been foretold.</p>
<p><strong><span style="text-decoration: underline;">3. Do your research </span></strong></p>
<p>I did a lot of research for the <em>Vanishing Track</em>. Probably too much, which is part of the reason why I had to cut 35,000 words from the manuscript. That and I like exposition way too much; another very bad habit as a writer.</p>
<p>I spent a lot of time walking around the Downtown Eastside of Vancouver while writing this book. I was collecting stories, personalities and settings. I was creating a mental map of the neighbourhood to populate with my characters. Once, when Jenn and I were in Vancouver for a weekend getaway, I took her on a walking tour of the DTES and pointed to places saying, <em>that’s the ally where Cole nearly gets killed by some thugs!</em>&#8230;Such a romantic.</p>
<p>The <em>best</em> thing I did by way of research was to spend a day with VPD police constable Jodyne Keller. She and I drove and walked around the Downtown Eastside, visited Single Room Occupancy hotels and talked with their residents and from her I learned a great deal about how the VPD handles missing person’s cases in the region. It was a really great way to test some of my assumptions while writing the book. Though I did way too much research, I would have gladly spent more time with Constable Keller.</p>
<p><strong><span style="text-decoration: underline;">4. Have Patience</span></strong></p>
<p>See Think-Ahead, above. It took much longer to get this book to press than I had wanted. I had hoped that this book would have been released in 2009, or 2010 at the latest. My plan was to have it come out before the Vancouver Olympics and the first few drafts I wrote used the 2010 games as a central theme in the mystery. That didn’t happen, so:</p>
<p><strong><span style="text-decoration: underline;">5. Be Flexible </span></strong></p>
<p>When the timeline for the first two books in the series developed very slowly, I rewrote the book, or at least the part of it that used the Olympics as a focus point for the theme of SRO redevelopment across the City of Vancouver. The plot still worked.</p>
<p><strong><span style="text-decoration: underline;">6. Work Really Hard </span></strong></p>
<p>The main thing I learned while writing this book was that I had to work really hard. Writing is hard work. Okay, that’s just what writers want you to think. Sometimes its hard work. First drafts are often pretty hard. Writing takes time and patience and effort and a lot of practice, and for some of us, that can be hard. Mostly it takes time. Malcolm Gladwell in his book <em>Outliers</em> talks about the rule of 10,000 hours; you have to do something for about that long to get good at it. If you write <span style="text-decoration: underline;">every single day</span> for three hours, it will take about 10 years to reach that magic number. It takes dogged determination to do that. That’s what I mean by working really hard.</p>
<p><strong><span style="text-decoration: underline;">7. Trust your Editor </span></strong></p>
<p>I’ve gone on at some <a href="../2011/10/25/pressing-send/">considerable length</a> on this subject. I feel blessed to have an amazing story editor, Frances Thorsen, and an equally fantastic copy editor Lenore Hietkamp. They know my writing and they know my myriad mistakes. They resist as best they can what must be an almost unassailable urge to chide me for my habitual follies. When you find an editor you can work worth, trust them. Push back when you can, but listen to them always.</p>
<p><strong><span style="text-decoration: underline;">8. Believe in yourself </span></strong></p>
<p>This is the bit where I remind you never to give up. Never. I was talking with a friend this week who has been helping me edit <em><a href="../works/the-third-riel-conspiracy/">The Third Riel Conspiracy</a></em> and we got onto the topic of PFO (Please *&amp;^% off) letters. AKA: Rejections. Every writer gets them. William Faulkner, one of the greatest American novelists of all time said he could paper the walls of his house with rejection letters. Louise Penny, who is a phenomenal success in the mystery genre, said she received 80 rejections before she entered a writing contest in England, came in second, landed an agent and book deals in Europe and the United States.</p>
<p><em>The Vanishing Track</em> wasn’t rejected by any publishers. Its predecessor <em>The Cardinal Divide</em> was and had it not seen the light of day, <em>the Vanishing Track</em> certainly would not have either. It took several years and half a dozen attempts to land a book deal for <em>The Cardinal Divide</em>. By deal I mean, I got about $500 for several years worth of blood sweat and tears. But it was a start! And I am grateful to NeWest Press – and in a nice twist of fate, my current publisher Ruth Linka, who was GM at NeWest – for, in a moment of delusional weakness, saying yes to Cole Blackwater.</p>
<p>When I started working with Ruth at TouchWood Editions on the Durrant Wallace series and<em> The End of the Line</em> it made sense to bring Cole Blackwater into the tent. Now, with the Silas Pearson – <a href="../works/the-red-rock-canyon-mysteries/">Red Rock Canyon Mysteries</a> due to launch in September, that tent is getting crowded and probably smells like old socks and horses. But I’m very happy there.</p>
<p>Moral: believe in yourself and your work. Keep trying. There are thousands of publishers, and if they ALL say no, self publish. Post the whole damn thing <a href="../category/among-the-wounded/">on a blog</a>. Give it away on the street corner. Be proud of what you’ve done. You’ve written a BOOK after all. That’s nothing to sneeze at.</p>
<p><strong><span style="text-decoration: underline;">9. Become Attached </span></strong></p>
<p>For those of you who read my blog posts on <a href="../category/buddhism/">Buddhism</a> and <a href="../category/taoism/">Taoism</a> and all manner of touchy-feely topics, you’ve likely heard me counsel non-attachment. Well, that’s fine when it comes to life’s big mysteries: There’s nothing solid to hold onto and everything is <a href="../2010/11/14/our-brief-lives-beneath-the-oceanic-sky/">illusion</a>, blaa-blaa-blaa. But books and writing; that’s another thing all together.</p>
<p>I don’t mean become attached to the words themselves. That would be bad as I’ve noted on my posts about editing. Become attached to the words is a sure-fire way to find yourself <a href="../2011/12/05/15-stages/">very sad</a>. What I’m talking about is subject matter. Become attached to what you are writing about. In the case of the third Cole Blackwater novel what I became attached to was the idea that homelessness could be solved.</p>
<p>Homelessness is a human constructed problem. In fact, the problem is that we haven’t constructed enough proper human habitation. There is a dire need for community supported housing in Vancouver, Victoria, Toronto, Calgary and all across Canada and the United States. These housing units should be built and maintained by the government and could allow people who have lived rough, or in shelters, to slowly gain their independence by living in units where they get help when they need it.</p>
<p>Studies show that over the life of these units, they are much less expensive than paying the astronomical costs – some studies suggest as much as $40K/year/person – associated with homelessness. Policing, social services, health care and other expenses associated with people being left to fend for themselves when they are suffering from addictions, mental illness or have simply fallen on hard times are a tremendous burden on our budgets. Our failure as a society to support the least fortunate among us is an unacceptable burden on our moral conscious.</p>
<p>Homelessness is entirely caused by human actions. The rich get richer, the poor get poorer, and they get left behind. Poverty, and its sister homelessness, are born from affluence. I am entirely in favour of the compassionate society that helps people left out in the cold to live dignified, safe and meaningful lives.</p>
<p>That’s what I’ve learned. And a lot about sentence structure, plot, narrative, character development and dialog, but this has gone on long enough as it is.</p>
<p>To get updates on <em>The Vanishing Track</em> keep in touch by following me on Twitter <a href="http://twitter.com/stephenlegault">@stephenlegault.</a></p>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Mar 2012 15:22:25 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Stephen Legault</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I hit the first draft doldrums this morning. I didn’t write a word of the first draft of The Glacier Gallows, the 4th book in the Cole Blackwater series. First morning in three weeks I haven’t penned a word. I’m at 33,000 words of what will be a 90,000 word first draft – twenty chapters [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I hit the first draft doldrums this morning. I didn’t write a word of the first draft of <em>The Glacier Gallows</em>, the 4<sup>th</sup> book in the <a href="../works/the-vanishing-track/" target="_blank">Cole Blackwater series</a>. First morning in three weeks I haven’t penned a word. I’m at 33,000 words of what will be a 90,000 word first draft – twenty chapters in – and I hit the wall.</p>
<p>One day isn’t a big deal, but I suspect that this will last a few days. The problem isn’t a lack of passion for this book. On the contrary, I am really enjoying this story. Nor is it that this book is particularly hard to write. It isn’t. Compared to my recent foray into the morass of Canadian history in <a href="../works/the-third-riel-conspiracy/" target="_blank">The Third Riel Conspiracy</a>, this is easy. Unlike with the Durrant Wallace series, where I have to remain true to historical events, characters and timelines, with the Cole Blackwater series I can make just about everything up. It’s simple, easy writing that flows and as I’ve said elsewhere, I am really enjoying visiting with Cole again after so long apart.</p>
<p>The problem is that I’m out of my element. I’m writing this update from a hotel in East Glacier Montana. In the last week I’ve been in Nanaimo and Comox, BC; Pincher Creek and Calgary, AB, back home for a single night, and now back on the road. (There is a Doberman pincher with a shot gun guarding my house; don’t get any ideas).</p>
<p>I need habit to write well. I get up at 4:45 or so, drink a cup of strong tea, listen to the 5am news, and then write for two hours straight. On the weeks when the kids are with us, I break for breakfast and to walk them to school, and then come home to my day job. Weeks when they are not I can usually stretch my writing time until 8am. Sometimes in the evening I get a little editing in.</p>
<p>But life is busy and these are trying times, and so I’ve been on the road this week.</p>
<p>It’s not a big deal. In another week or so and I can resume my pattern. The book will get written. That’s not my concern. But I miss it. I love the feeling that comes with churning out three or four thousand words in the morning. It feels as if I’ve accomplished something of value.</p>
<p>The wind will be back in my sails soon enough. I won’t throw any horses overboard (oblique reference to the <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Horse_latitudes" target="_blank">Horse Latitudes</a>). And sometimes a break is what is needed to allow the story to congeal a little during my traditionally spastic episodes of first draft mania. What I’ve learned is that the pause is often as necessary as the activity in creating something of worth.</p>
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